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Infidelity by ~karamei:iconkaramei:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Other Romance > Open


That once-warm embrace
Has now turned cold
Brought on by
Those countless lies
Which drown themselves
In their own endlessness
My eyes now reflect
Your apathy
Which you claim
Is of the past
Which is right
About some things
The only thing that will
Stay the same
Is your own
Infidelity.
©2004-2009 ~karamei
:iconkaramei:

Author's Comments

okay before you guys read this and all that, keep in mind, i am not a poet. graphic art is more my thing.
anyway, i wrote this poem a little less than a month ago.. i feel it expressed clearly the emotions i felt at the time..and have felt, up until now. i was uncomfortable to post this, which is why i haven't until now.

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~Solitude-within Mar 19, 2004, 3:21:59 PM
Wow, seems like a good enough poem to me, maybe you should become a poet :p. Well done -goes to check out your art-

--
A touch of blessing, which cannot be undone.

"I am my own God, God walking Earth" - Tom S Englund
:iconchaoticdarkness:
~chaoticdarkness Mar 19, 2004, 3:45:10 PM
I really like it ^__^ it's an awesome piece...better than anything I can think of..short..but powerful...small but meaningful..and that's what makes it great..the way u expressed it

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Sometimes life's too short to think twice...
:icondarkicequeen:
~DarkIceQueen Mar 19, 2004, 6:55:53 PM
Wow, all I have to say is one word: Deep. K, I'm done. C ya! :floating:

--
:blackrose:The one who makes you cry isn't worth your tears, and the one who is worth your tears wouldn't make you cry. :blackrose:
True Love Never Dies
:iconnorwayfox:
~NorwayFox Mar 20, 2004, 9:19:21 AM
Aww, that was good, Carrie! :hug: It was a good poem for a "non-poet." You're good! :hug:
:iconinfidelity:
~infidelity Mar 20, 2004, 11:21:00 AM
hehe, my friend sent me this link, because it's my user name. i'm very glad to see it was such a meaningful poem - ít's always refreshing to stumble upon something so well written. :) you've capture a lot of emotion here, and it's short, but it really feels like you said everything you wanted to. -happy dance for the 'non-poet'-

--
These brittle ghosts won't love you.
-- Converge, To the Lions
:iconkaramei:
~karamei Mar 20, 2004, 2:08:30 PM
wahh thank you :hug: wow, that's cool that its title is your username! :D
:iconinfidelity:
~infidelity Mar 21, 2004, 7:49:48 AM
hehe. it is! but infidelity is a pretty word and a cool concept, so why shouldn't everyone use it? -spins randomly-

--
These brittle ghosts won't love you.
-- Converge, To the Lions
:iconchief-icy-sunset:
~Chief-Icy-Sunset Mar 26, 2004, 7:56:20 PM
Kewl-ness!!! * :claps: for 'non-poet'*

--
"Ladies and Gentlemen, hobos and tramps, cock-eyed mosquitoes, and bowlegged ants; I come here before you to stand here behind you and tell you something I know nothing about...."
:iconillixim:
~illixim May 11, 2004, 8:00:11 PM
Though you say you're not a poet, I believe you should be.

--
Teen the Deranged
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